下面就跟着小编一起了解
雅思写作实用技巧,希望对大家的学习有所帮助。
1.名词化
名词化(Nominalization)是指在写作中尽量使用名词充当各类成分。其
主要作用是通过去除不必要的人称和从句,使得表达更加精简。
例如:我很开心 。
翻译为:I am happy all the time.
其实真正想表达的是happy这种情绪,但是如果把I 放在主语位置,实际上很难抓
住考官的眼球,考官很难快速挑选出关键词。
所以把happy 修改为happiness,放在主语位置,就可以改为:
Happiness persists on me.
名词化的难点是什么
名词化真正难的是扭转思维方式。在写句子时要掉不必要的信息或者不要让重点
信息被掩盖。
例如:我们骑车的时候可以避免高峰期拥堵,还不需要找停车场。
we can avoid traffic jam and need not to find special parking lot for a bike in peak
time.(原句)
“we”放在前面,根本看不到后面的交通拥挤,所以建议修改为:
Traffic congestion ,which consumes much of commuting time, can be avoided by
cycling without the demand of a parking lot.(名词化后)
思维上的转换,是名词化的重难点。7分以上的作文几乎看不到任何的
people, some people,others 等,整个文章的质感和学术性议论文和接近。
名词化的用法有哪些
鉴于名词化比较难以使用,所以给需要突破瓶颈的同学分享一下技巧。
A、动词变名词
原句: He failed.This became the turning point of his life.This made him lost his
fortune and fame.
fail为动词,变为failure,就可以修改为:
His failure ,which was the turning point of his life, made him lost his fortune and
fame.
B、形容词名词化
例如:我们通过旅游发现了自然之美。
We can appreciate the beautiful nature .(原句)
The appreciation to beauty of nature can be accomplished through tourism .(名
词化后)
C、用时间、地点名词做主语
例如:在2003年,小村庄遭遇了特大的飓风。(Hurricane)
The village was attack by the hurricane.
2003 witnessed the hurricane attacked the small village.
2003 witnessed the attack of hurricane to this small village.
D、被动语态
例如:人们总是忽略全球化的缺点。
People always ignore the drawbacks of globalization.(原句)
The drawbacks of globalization are always ignored.(名词化后)
E、用抽象名词做主语
例如:我害怕蜘蛛。
I am afraid of spiders.(原句)
My fear is stimulated by spiders,the sensible perception of climate change is
difficult.(名词化后)
F、用with ,without 等介词 名词
例如:由于没有妥善治理好污水,湖泊已经污染很严重了。
If we do not have enough time ,we cannot finish this task.
Without enough time, this task cannot be finished.(原句)
Without the punctual purification of waste water,the lake has suffered serious
pollution.(名词化后)
以上就是雅思写作的技巧了,可以点入收藏,以准备不时之需。