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英语六级写作分析

学习经验 四级六级考试

2020年05月10日 14:38:00
下面小编整理了英语六级——作文解析专题,希望能给大家带来办帮助,一份耕耘一份收获。放平心态,全力以赴!祝大家都能顺利通过四六级考试,取得好成绩!
Part I Writing (30 minutes)
一、篇章连贯:可以通过文章内容的内在联系来表现篇章的连贯性。
1、具体到一般:表现形式为先举例具体的事例进行分析、说明,进而得出论证或结论,在段末往往以主题句的形式表现出来。
2、一般到具体:表现为在文章段首以主题句的形式出现,然后通过具体的叙述、说明、举例使主题句变得具体、明白、易懂。
二、常用句型
1、开头
It's well known to us that...
Recently,... has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.
One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that...
People's view/opinions /ideas on ... vary from person to person.Some people think that ... they hold this opinion because... However,others hold that...
2、主要论述方法
A is to B what C is to D
According to ..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show...
The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to believe that the data drawn form... is representative of...
As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws.
3、结尾
In my opinion,it is more advisable to do ... than to do
Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of...
We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with
It is high time that we put an end to... Otherwise,...
开篇句
1) Recently, sth./the problem of...has been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern.A
(e.g. Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.)
2) One of the universal issues we are faced with/that cause increasing concern is that...
(e.g. One of the universal issues that draw (cause) growing concern is whether it is wise of man to have invented the automobile.)
3) It is a traditional practice to...in our society.
(e.g. It is a traditional practice for young people to be financially dependent on their parents for anything like marriage and housing.)
4) When it comes to...(sth.), most people (the public) maintain(s)/contend(s) that...
5) A public debate has arisen as to/over/concerning...
(e.g. A public debate has arisen as to whether one should step forward bravely in the event of crime.)
6) Once in a newspaper/magazine, I hit upon the report that... (e.g. Once in a newspaper, I hit upon the news that a quickwitted policeman spotted a suspect's spittle in the street blotted it up and ran a DNA test on it which led to the man's arrest for a murder. This case best counts as a practical application of the DNA technique.)
高分作文标志
1:是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
写作常用方法
1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
30个经典的替换词
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 沪江四六级
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替换most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.沪
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible

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