nav_xian
返回返回 教育头条

托福独立写作经典开头模板整理分享

学习经验 托福

2019年12月09日 16:45:15
小编为大家带来“托福独立写作经典开头模板整理”,希望对大家有所帮助。预祝大家托福考试顺利,祝愿大家每天保持好的心态去面对生活,其实一天很短,好的心情过一天,坏的心情过也是一天。
1. 标准写法:直接表明立场开门见山
题目:
Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.
模板:
Contrary to the statement’s premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.
点评:
开门见山式的开头段写法其实是比较标准的一种写法,因为托福的独立写作从题目要求来说本质上就是一篇议论文,而且还是立论文,需要考生自己提出观点然后论述证明。那么在开头段就直接鲜明地亮出观点无疑是很合理的写法,对考官来说也能一、时间就看到你的观点,可以说是对读者比较友好的一种写法。比如上面的这个模板,就是一、句话直接写出了自己对题目的反对立场,并且之后给出了引出下面正式论述的引导句。这种开头段写法虽然不玩花样看似有点平淡甚至BORING,但对于不要求太多文笔更看重论述逻辑的议论文来说确实是比较高效的写法,也很适合新手考生进行模仿学习。
2. 创意写法:引用谚语名言联系现实
题目:
“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.
模板:
As a saying goes, “God helps those help themselves”, which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned, I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.
点评:
这种写法就比较有创意了,当然大家在写中文作文时肯定也用过,就是开头就先引用个名人名言压一下场面,比如某某曾经说过。。。这样的写法。这种写法对考生的英语积累有一定要求,引用的谚语或者名言既要符合题目场景切题,考生也需要完整记住这句名言而不能自行修改甚至凭空捏造,无论是强行凑名言还是伪造的做法都只会让结果适得其反。当然这种写法能够一定程度上展现出考生的英语素养和积累,可以说是一种比较炫技的写法,大家如果在英语的言语名言方面有不错的积累可以考虑一下这种写法。
3. 稳妥写法:先复述原题再引出观点
题目:
"We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”
模板:
I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life styles.
点评:
这种写法比起直接开门见山亮观点的写法来说可能更加稳妥一些,毕竟先简单复述题目再表达自己观点是托福指南OG中比较推荐的开头写法。而且无论考生对题目观点是否赞同,对题目复述之后进行适当的让步再亮出观点也是一种比较委婉的表述方式。当然这种写法需要注意不能引用太多原题,而且不能照搬需要用自己的话来适当改动一下。这其中的度大家需要把握好,否则反而会引起一些不必要的扣分。

4. 设问写法:自问自答给出立场态度
题目:
"As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”
模板:
As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjust? While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.
点评:
自问自答式的开头段写法在给出的范文类资料中是比较少见的。这种设问写法的作用也很明显,通过汇总其实也就是变相复述一下原题目,对其中比较尖锐的矛盾问题直接以提问的形式来引出之后自己的看法。这种写法其实是比较挑题目的,如果作文原题是那种有明显对立互斥观点,或者要求考生二选一的题目,那么用这种写法就比较适合了。而对于一些只要求考生给出自己的观点比较平淡一些的题目,这种写法可能就会给人强行挑事的感觉了。因此大家学习这种开头模板写法需要注意根据题目来选择使用。

感谢您阅读托福独立写作经典开头模板整理分享,我是教育宝专业的托福学习顾问王敏,从事教育培训行业以来,发现用户很难找到适合自己的课程,希望通过我的专业可以帮您制定出合适的学习方案。

教育宝托福频道为你提供87家机构372条真实评价,在这里您可以了解及时、全面的课程信息及真实用户评价,各位可以根据自己的实际情况选取适合的机构,选择托福并不是越贵越好,只有最适合的才是最好的。

在选课过程中如需帮助,您可以加我微信:18560125702,我将为您提供全面专业的选课帮助,让我们一起开始美好的学习之旅吧。返回教育宝头条

【免责声明】本文仅代表作者本人观点,与教育宝无关。教育宝对文中陈述、观点判断保持中立,不对所包含内容的准确性、可靠性或完整性提供任何保证。请读者仅作参考,特此声明!

相关推荐

400-029-0997