雅思写作万年难提分? 还永远不知道自己错在哪儿? 今天小编总结了各类烤鸭们经典的6种错误, 希望同学们在接下来的考试中 都能成功避免!
01不一致
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等.
例1. when>剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致.
改为:>
02修饰语错位
英语与
汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点学生往往没有引起足够的,因而造成了不必要的误解.
例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末.
03句子不完整
在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.
例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so>
剖析:本句后半部分"for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so>
改为:there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
04悬垂修饰语
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明” 谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了.
改为:when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析:句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚.
改为:to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
05词性误用
“词性误用”常表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等.
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
剖析:negative 系形容词,误作动词。
改为:none can deny the importance of money.
06指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句:mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.玛丽和我姐姐很要好,因为她要她做她的伴娘。
读完上面这一句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为:mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析:句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为:we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
以上就是小编为大家整理的写作中常犯的一些错误,当然雅思写作非一日之功,想要有效提高雅思成绩还是需要系统的提分指导。