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托福写作如何写好高分托福开头段，很多学生可能词汇量不少，语言组织能力也不错，可是到了托福写作的时候，从开头段开始就写不好，万事开头难，好的开头就成功了一半。
举个题目为例子：How do movie or television influence people’s behavior?
学生作品：With development of society, especially for science and technology, more and more people are discussing about whether mass media impact on people’s behavior and how. From my perspective, movies and televisions did have bad influence on most of people, this issue should be discussed case by case.
点评：写作时态的选择：内容要和题目的时态保持一致；开头段的写作很没有新意。
建议：开头段的写作技巧
方法1套用it作主语的句型it is true that……tvsandmovies……
Eg: it is ture that TVs and movies haveinfluenced=也可以换成positive and negative effects on people's behaivors=也可以换成words and actions in=也可以换成through its programs and contents=也可以换成plots 或者lots of ways【注意：此处可以写具体一点】
注意：拼写 时态 单复数
Influence=affect 中性词，包含正负两种结果positive negative
又，使用上下义词替换技巧
比如Fruit apple banana
方法2非谓语动词作主语开头watchingTV and movies……
示例：Watching TV and movieshave positive and negative effects on individuals' behaviors through its programs and plots.
方法3换题目的词序，使用sth作主语
示例：Individuals' behaviorshave positively and negativelybeeninfluenced bywatching TV and movies through its programs and plots.
总结：开头段的写作=同义替换 无中生有【准确理解题目的意思，同义替换，用题目中没有的词汇表达题目想要表达的内容】
举个题目为例子：How do movie or television influence people’s behavior?
学生作品：With development of society, especially for science and technology, more and more people are discussing about whether mass media impact on people’s behavior and how. From my perspective, movies and televisions did have bad influence on most of people, this issue should be discussed case by case.
点评：写作时态的选择：内容要和题目的时态保持一致；开头段的写作很没有新意。
建议：开头段的写作技巧
方法1套用it作主语的句型it is true that……tvsandmovies……
Eg: it is ture that TVs and movies haveinfluenced=也可以换成positive and negative effects on people's behaivors=也可以换成words and actions in=也可以换成through its programs and contents=也可以换成plots 或者lots of ways【注意：此处可以写具体一点】
注意：拼写 时态 单复数
Influence=affect 中性词，包含正负两种结果positive negative
又，使用上下义词替换技巧
比如Fruit apple banana
方法2非谓语动词作主语开头watchingTV and movies……
示例：Watching TV and movieshave positive and negative effects on individuals' behaviors through its programs and plots.
方法3换题目的词序，使用sth作主语
示例：Individuals' behaviorshave positively and negativelybeeninfluenced bywatching TV and movies through its programs and plots.
总结：开头段的写作=同义替换 无中生有【准确理解题目的意思，同义替换，用题目中没有的词汇表达题目想要表达的内容】
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