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2019年08月23日 18:09:37
雅思大作文9分攻略 --利弊类型题,在上一篇文章中,我们通过一道利弊类型题,讲解了如何打造雅思大作文的骨架以及如何为其注入血肉。在此不多赘述,有遗忘的同学还请及时复习。
这篇文章我们继续来说利弊类型题。有的同学在确定了自己的立场(agree, disagree, partly agree)之后,并不清楚主体段应该怎么写,这篇文章主要来解决这个问题。
首先,我们来回顾一下上一篇文章中的作文。
题目:
The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Governments in some countries spend large amounts of money on space exploration progammes. I completely agree with the idea that these are a waste of money, and that the funds should be allocated to public services.
explain why ’space’ spending should be stopped explain why public service spending is better spend on services that benefit us all 在开头段中,我们对投资太空探索项目是持否定态度的,而对投资公共服务则是持支持态度。所以我们在二、三两段分别阐述否定及支持的原因,以重复开头段观点的方法收尾。会让读者觉得行文流畅、逻辑通顺、理所应当。 我们再来看几道题目。 题目: Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 这篇我们想写一个 disagree 的文章。首先,题目说的是爱好越有挑战性才会越有趣,既然我们要反对这个观点,那我们肯定是认为这种说法过于**,一些简单的爱好也同样有趣,投资赚钱和弯腰捡钱都是会让我们开心的事情。所以这篇文章我们就可以这样来安排: Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable. Explain why easy hobbies can be enjoyable Explain why difficult hobbies can be fun Conclusion: disagree that difficult hobbies are better 再来看两道题目,这两道题目我们都来写 partly agree,大家可以来构思一下主体段的内容。

题目: Many people say that we now live in ‘consumer societies’ where money and possessions are given too much importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 题目: In the last century, the first man to walk on the moon said it was “a giant leap for mankind”. However, some people think it has made little difference to our daily lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 一道题目说我们现在生活在一个消费者社会,对于金钱和财产看的过重。为什么要部分同意呢?因为我们的社会确实有向消费者社会发展的趋势,但在这个趋势中,总有一部分人对身外之物不是那么看重,他们有除此之外的其他追求。
所以我们将这篇文章做如下安排: It is true that many people criticise modern society because it seems to be too materialistic. I agree with this to some extent, but I do not think it is the case that everyone is a victim of consumer culture. I believe many people do focus too much on money However, many others are not money oriented Conclusion: partly agree 既然是部分同意,我们当然需要给出同意部分的原因,以及不同意部分的原因,并由此组成两个完整的主体段落。
我们再来看第二个题目。 题目说上世纪人类首次登月成功,并没有给人们的生活带来变化。如果我们完全同意这个观点,我们通篇要围绕“没有变化”来写;如果我们完全不同意这个观点,则要围绕“变化巨大”来写。但实际上,这个事件对我们普通人的影响似有若无,完全没有影响好像不太可能,影响巨大好像又体会不出来。所以我们采用部分同意的写法,我们承认登月成功这件事对人类的实际生活并没有产生多大改变,但是在精神层面激励着后辈不断发起对太空的探索: It is often argued that the act of sending a man to the moon has been of no benefit to normal people. While I agree that this is true in practical terms, I believe that the psychological impact of this great achievement should not be underestimated. No benefit in practical terms (standard of living, health) But it was an inspiring achievement Conclusion: partly agree 文章中的观点仅供大家做参考,如果你的观点与文章中的不一致,能做到自圆其说即可,这里只是提供一个思考的过程。

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