雅思G类小作文6分与7分的区别 帮助大家了解雅思G类小作文6分与7分的区别。无论你的目标是5、6还是7，都应该认真阅读以下内容。组长再次提醒G友们：雅思写作分数是四项评分标准的总分平均，而每位考生在四项评分标准的表现通常是不均衡的，一定要对标高分，对比自身差距，尽可能发挥优势，弥补短板，才会更快取得目标分数。
简单说，不了解差距，怎么进步并达标呢？
题目：
You were travelling via domestic flight to a place outside your home town. But when you reached your place of stay, you found that you forgot your travel bag in the airport. Write a letter to the airport authority regarding this and in your letter,
-Say why you are writing
-How you lost your bag
-What action you are requesting from authority
6分作文：
注：错误已用绿色标出，注意与改后范文对比，避免自己犯同类错误。
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about my suitcase which I lost in your flight during my travel.
I am frequent traveller of your airlines. Last Sunday, I took flight number 464 from Bangloreto delhiat 10 o’clock in the night.I was carring one laptop bag and one suitcase and I put the same in the cabin only. The flight reached late in delhi around 1 o’clock in night. I was very tired due to hectic day schedule. I took my laptop bag and forget to take my suit case before leaving, I already this to your claim officiers.
It is black in colour and brand name is VIP printed on Left. It is four wheel trolly bag new model launched by company. It contains my important official documents, such as two blue colored fils, two green spiral binded manuals, one planner from hilt, one imported pen from parker and other few documents. In addition to that there are few clothes as well.

Please find it on urgent basis and do inform me on my number once you are able to locate it. Please send it to my below mentioned home address.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Rajesh Verma
(211 words)
从6到7的部分修改：
修改后的7分作文：
Dear Sir/Mam,
I am writing to inform you about my suitcase which I lost in your flight during my travel.
Last Sunday, I took flight number 464 from Bangalore to Delhi at 10 o’clock in the night. I was carrying one laptop bag and one suitcase which I kept in the cabin under my seat only. Unexpectedly, the flight reached late in Delhi at around 1 o’clock in the night and I was very tired and heavy-eyed due to my hectic day schedule. Before leaving, I took my laptop bag thoughforgot to take my suit case.
My suitcase is black in colour with brand name “VIP” printed on the left top corner. It is actually a trolley bag containing my important official documents, such as two blue and two green files along with one imported pen from “Parker”. In addition to that, there were few clothes as well.
I request you to please find my suitcase as soon as possible and kindly inform me once found so that I could collect from you.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Rajesh Verma
(183 words)
组长解析：
1.从修改点不难看出，G类小作文从6-7，需要控制语法和词汇错误，用非常用词替换常用词，精简句子，调整句子结构，除多余信息以确保叙述内容扣题，写好段落中心句等。大家可以结合自己的实际情况，着重发现自己平时没意识到或不够的方面，重点关注和提升。
2.除了学习差距，这篇7分范文也是很好的素材来源。看看人家关于丢东西都写了哪些“跟真事儿似的”但又不啰嗦的细节，用了什么词组来表达位置、时间、旅行物品等常用、有用、你却不知道怎么说的内容，抄下来，背记，记住了，好处大大的——很多表达是可以用于多种场景的，一举多得。
3.学完之后，自己写一篇，再对比范文，发现问题。这个过程，提分必须。