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观点类大作文社会类话题
Some people think the use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do agree or disagree?

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题目大意
一些人认为手机的使用和吸烟一样是的。吸烟在特定地方被禁止，因此，手机也应该被禁止。同意否
写作思路
这道题目看上去题目很怪。有些同学搞不太清楚手机和吸烟有啥关系。其实，这道题目可以一分为二的去辩论。一方面要说手机和的关系。另一方面要说手机是否要禁止。这两点实际上都不太能够成立。虽然很多人觉得手机就是现代社会的精神，但是似乎也没有什么样的发明工具能像手机那样深深地影响我们生活的方方面面，特别是在交流和信息获取方面。第二点就有点无厘头了，吸烟是因为健康问题，手机没有这方面的影响，至少目前为止没有发现。而且很多地方禁止手机也是因为它的信号问题和声音问题不是因为健康的原因，所以无法类比。
审题，找出关键词
Anti-social 敏感词，,isolated, social phobia等
Mobile phone限定词，同替：smart phone，cell phone等
Ban限定词，同替：prohibit等
提纲
高分范文
It is not uncommon in some public places, such as subway, train station and anywhere else to see most of pedestrians and patrons completely immersed in what happening on the small screen of their smart phone, regardless of what really happens around. Some people think this behavior is viewed as an odd and anti-social one and should be prohibited by comparison with smoking. However, I cannot concur with this view.

From my perspective, sometimes smart phone makes users, especially teenagers disconnect the interaction to one another and this looks anti-social. Quite a few young people pretend to use their phone in order to avoid face to face contact and spend most of their time on reading through the smart phone screen and eliminate almost all intimacy of communication. This is what some one called ‘social barrier’. However, instead of making a phone call, one can simply type their messages and send them instantly to communicate with their friends. And because of the possibility of accessing internet, smart phone has opened up a virtual world where one can communicate with others in a wide spectrum, which has enriched interaction. So, not to be an anti-social stigma, online chatting has become an emerging type of communication which is very different from the past.
Compared with smoking which is proved to be damaging to human bodies and should be banned in public places, the use of smart phone is criticized in the realm of morality or technique problem not mortality one. Audience are required to turn off their phones or mute them when appreciating classical concert. This is not because of the detrimental effects on health but of virtue problem that may destroy the atmosphere. Other prohibition of mobile phone is relevant to its technique problems which might disturb the signals transmitted from stations, such as gas station and other places.
In conclusion, there is an irony to ban mobile phone in modern society since it has transformed human interaction style and has become an integral part of our life. This is also a blatantly implausible to analogize smart phone using to smoking.
相关词汇
Pedestrian行人
Immerse沉浸
Pretend假装
Intimacy亲密
Stigma耻辱
Mortality死亡
Detrimental破坏性的