怎么才能写好
托福大作文的结尾段? 很多考生由于时间关系往往未能好好地总结托福独立写作的结尾段,或者有些不知如何写结尾段,往往就背背模板,随便选个容易记的套进去。殊不知,一个完美的结尾需符合两项原则:Displays progression and syntactic variety,即文章的进程感和遣词造句的多样性。所以同学们首先应该明白结尾段的写作思路,这样即使在时间不充裕的情况下,也能写出符合考试要求的结尾段。
一般说来,结尾段是用来重申立场的(restatement of thesis),但是,结尾不能再出现新的论点了(do not introduce new supporting ideas),同时也不能妥协而提出反方观点的优势(not the time to make any concessions to the opposing side),而是应该提出一些建议来弥补我方观点的不足之处。
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下面我们来看一个例子:
题目:The Internet has negative effects on our life. What’s your opinon?
我方立场:The Internet is positive to our society.
结尾段就可以这样展开:
重申观点:For these reasons, I believe that human beings have benefited a lot from the invention of the Internet.
然后解释Internet在当代生活的现状:As the Internet spreads and becomes more and more common. Its importance to people’s lives cannot be overstated.
提出我方观点需要完善的不足之处:However, the Internet is not a right, and not all people are able to access the Internet.
提出完善我方观点的应对措施:Thus, the gulf between the rich and the poor will continue to expand unless people make a conscious effort to ensure that technology and education are made available for everyone, especially for those in the underdeveloped areas.
从这个例子我们可以看出,重申观点的句式和词汇较好不要跟首段的一致。再者,要进行辩证分析,因为凡事都有利弊,主要看人们怎么去处理。之后就是要提出一个解决方案,这样你的作文才能得到升华,有始有终且能自圆其说。希望同学们能够通过多练笔来提高行文的流畅性和遣词造句的多样性。