在雅思教学过程中，我遇到的学生存在的问题不尽相同，有的下笔艰涩，大作文首段落可以磨蹭十分钟；有的主体段落找不到写作素材，全凭题目所给的关键词来回重复凑满两段……
但其实这些作为雅思议论文教学的难点，同学们通常更，所以我们今天的内容是同学们平时容易忽略的：一篇essay 如何“收”
雅思大作文收尾策略分析
策略一：归纳观点或重申观点
话题：（2019年2月16日雅思大作文真题） Nowadays, children spend a lot of time watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
参考范文结尾段
To sum up, watching TV or playing computer games, like many things, can be both helpful and harmful to children.The issue, then, is not whether children should be allowed to watch TV or play computer games, but how parents should monitor their children’s screen hours. （范文出处：九分达人作者唐伟胜老师） 结尾一般写2-3句话，有一句必为观点句。有的学生习惯开门见山，
这一段就阐明观点，那么后一段需要重申观点， 需要注意与一段的观点做到句型结构和关键词汇的区别，而不是简单的重复。 唐老师在此范文的首段落亮明观点的句式为：
What effects do watching TV and playing computer games have on children’s mental abilities? The answer to this question, to my mind, is that there are potential dangers as well as benefits. 可以明显看出一段和后一段观点匹配，但是不存在用词和句式上的雷同。

至于想拿更好成绩的同学，就要关注此结尾段的第二个句子。从技巧性来说，第二个句子就符合7＋作文的评分标准。首先作者运用了比较结构not … but …，这对于题目中所给的关键词做了概念辨析，这是很多同学在实际写作过程中忽略的。 “单纯”的考生更喜欢从自己支持的角度，努力去说服考官他的视角多么正确、多么重要，而 从实际说服效果来说，与其他对象的比较分析更容易让读者自己得出结论，这个让读者参与思考的过程才是考场老油子的体现。
策略二：概括主体段素材点，加深考官印象
话题：(胡敏雅思写作第七代教材) Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 参考范文结尾段： In spite of the utility of convenience foods, people are unlikely to abandon practices that are economically sound and give them great pleasure. It is hard to imagine a world in which people do not continue to enjoy traditional, home-cooked meals at least some of the time.