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雅思作文开头写法 雅思初级

学习经验 雅思

2019年04月25日 20:07:22
相信了解雅思的同学们一定知道,雅思小作文也是套路慢慢,在我们熟悉了评分标准和研究过雅思考官的满分作文后,才发现雅思小作文只需要以下几步,轻松搞定。
热身阶段
1. 图表类型
柱状体、饼图、表格、线形图,地图和流程图
2. 写作要求
客观性,准确性,详尽性
3. 段落设置
进入正题
今天我们具体来说说雅思小作文开头段的修改规则
开头段的写法:改写 / 转述题目
同义替换
1. 同义词替换
2. 关键词词性、位置的转换
3. 时间、地点的改写
4. 名词和从句之间的相互转换
原题:The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
改后:The chart describes the percentage of diverse types (同义词替换)of poor families (改变关键词的位置和词性)in Australia in 1999.
show = describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/
summarize/ outline/ indicate
give information about/compare
proportion = percentage
categories = kinds, types
families = households
families living in poverty = poor families
men and women = males and females
population = people
2. 时间、国家的改写。
原句:The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
时间改写:
between March 1993 and March 1999
during the period from March 1993 to March 1999.
地点改写(具体 概括)
in the U.S. and Japan:
in two different countries
3. 名词和从句之间的相互转换
The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
N. how N. V. (change / fluctuate)
unemployment rates
how unemployment rates changed

总结阶段
末尾,我们通过一个题目来练习一下
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
原题:The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
改写1:The given line chart compares the percentage of aged people in Japan, Sweden and U.S.A. during the period from 1940 to 2040.
改写2:The main concern of the following graph is to present how aged people fluctuate in Japan, Sweden and U.S.A. during the period from 1940 to 2040.

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